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Fatal Christmas Card (*special*)-comment
written by Khaotic09:49 PM 4/8/05Verse 1:
teenager lost in the night
everyday she is about to die
as she seems to be crying
she picked up a gun and a card
she wrote how she was down
it comes christmas day she was found
lying in a bed with a bullet in her head
they picked up the card went around
listen to the silence that the card said
mother, father i love you much forgive me
for i have sin i picked up the gun
and i did it again accept this time
i wont wake up...
Chorus 1:
teenager lost in the night
everday she is down and about to die
she picked up the gun and a card
she wrote on it how she was down
it comes christmas day she was found
lying in a bed with a bullet in her head
they picked up the card went around
listen to the silence that the card said
mother, father i love you much forgive me
for i have sin i picked up the gun
and i did it again accept this time
i wont wake up...
Verse 2:
her father screamed throw the card down
her mother was crying all night long
her father said goodbye my dear love you much
there is nothing to fear, then the men
took her body her father said take care of her for
i love her much she looked at me with the bullet in her head
but i couldnt cry when i looked at her, just want to die...
fatal day, i went home to stop myself,i tried to stop
i fell down to the ground i grabbed my gun looked in the
mirror.....
Chorus 2:
fatal christmas card, fatal christmas card
fatal christmas day, fatal angel, fatal...
my dear, there is nothing to fear come with thee
you shouldnt cry when you looked at yourself
you are now free...from all your pains
Verse 3:
i grabbed the bullets inserted in my gun
then i looked in the mirror again
i saw my pain as the tears ran down my eyes
all i could think about was her face lying dead in blood
as my tears stroll down my face i lifted the gun to my head
then i thought about her pretty smilys her funny laughs
i then tried to put the gun down as my pain starts strong
i tried to help myself but i kept thinking about her
i then grabbed my gun i took to my head said a prayer
as i begun to put my finger on the trigger
i then saw her in the mirror i dropped my gun i looked at her
as she was telling me she was fine i dropped down begun to cry
as i saw her i wanted to comfort her but she is dead
i stopped myself when i saw her in the mirror...
i then looked again all i could see was darkness
i couldnt believe my eyes as her form in the mirror cleared
all i could think was the...fatal christmas card..fatal |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this a song about a young girl's suicide and the pain the family went thru its kind of deep it is... sad very sad
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| » Comments / Feedback | by pleading*4*death (4-8-2005 - 10:02 PM)
| wow i am crying right now ... that was really deep... |
by drama_queen_ks13 (4-8-2005 - 10:06 PM)
by mansonlover91 (4-8-2005 - 10:25 PM)
| thats really good.its very deep i like it a lot. u2u me some time |
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