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» Poem: ode to failure
ode to failure
written by GeishaGirl
09:38 AM 4/9/05
I was yours to use, to choose, to loose, for you to abuse
Your every wish became my goal, for your every whim I would have sold my soul
I obeyed your every command, for you I would've made a forest out of the sand

But then you went and expelled me from your life story
Now I wander this plane, my heart is filled with fear and worry
Without you my existence is meaningless, for I am an empire and you are my empress

I have been forsaken, from your life
Forbidden, from your sight
Banished, from your flight
Turned away, from your light
Without you I am in pain

For you I would have cared, shared, my soul I would have bared for you to feast
Your praise was the greatest pleasure; I let you play with my feelings at your leisure
I endured your every lashing, for you I would have sent the sun and moon clashing

But then you went and thew me out
Filling my mind with panic and doubt
With you I only got one chance, without you I wander as if in a trance

I have been discarded, from you being
Deserted, I’m no longer living
Murdered, by your feelings
Severed, as if by a knife
I’m suffering

You were my life, my love, my song, my dove.
You were my castle, my keep, my will, my thrill
But since you left me broken and bleeding
Like a trampled seedling, I’ve been no more


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Again one from a friend. Its off one of his stories.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Draco (4-17-2005 - 03:54 PM)
just so you know i'm the one who wrote this, just ask GeishaGirl, she knows who i am, it's the first one i ever wrote so tell me what you think

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