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IT-part 9- Give up *plz comment?*
written by mishy007710:18 AM 4/9/05You're drowning in this ocean of maddness
Surrounded by an enviroment of saddness
IT has cornered you and made you cry
IT made you wish that you would die
But you still hold on, why do you fight?
Why not give up? It's not wrong or right
IT makes the tears stream down your face
IT makes you long to leave this horrid place
You know you want to cut deeper then you do
Why not do it? End it... Cut all the way through
Better yet, hold the razor up to your throat
Then up to heaven, your soul will float
IT has done all this to your mind
Its a constant battle, IT aint kind
Just give up, who cares if IT wants that? |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
About time I did a part 9, ya? :) It's cool, I wrote this a while ago, I have a heap more to post, soon you'll see a lot of happy ones! yay! :D I've written a lot these past days :D PLEASE COMMENT???
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Jimmy_Lippstikk (4-9-2005 - 10:25 AM)
| jeezzzz this ones kinda messed up but i like it of course. |
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