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The Rose *plz comment*
written by mishy007710:28 AM 4/9/05I touch the rose, so beautiful, yet frail
I take in the colours, so vivid, yet pale
I pluck off a petal and then I hold it in my hand
Thinking to myself 'Will anyone ever understand?'
No one can understand this pain that I feel
Like the petals on this rose, I begin to peel
I feel as if my life unfolding infront of me
I am trying to see something no one can see
I am trying to see past all of these lies
Hoping not to fail at just one of these tries |
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Nice one, ya? I like the 1st 2 lines the most :D PLEASE COMMENT?
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