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A Living Lie *plz comment*
written by mishy007702:31 AM 4/10/05I look in the mirror, I look into my eyes
All I can see now is a life lived on lies
My mind used to be well hidden from the world
But now it's like an open journal of a pathetic little girl
With just one look at me you can tell I'm depressed
I lost control, I could once keep these feelings un-expressed
When I was sad I still wore a smile on my face
I made people believe I enjoyed living in this place
Until the day he discovered my lies
And I told him about all the endless cries
He saw the scar that was left behind
And since then, I no longer can hide |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (4-10-2005 - 02:40 AM)
| I think this poem was well told, almost like a story. I also feel it some what reflects on my life as well. |
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