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It Hurts
written by AthiestAnarchist02:29 PM 4/10/05I hate the school.
I hate the town.
Why do you hate me?
Why do you degrade me?
Brings me down.
You don't know it hurts.
It's all a big laugh for all of you.
You don't understand.
I know everyone says that...
But you really don't.
Laughing...I can hear them.
I'm staring at the ceiling...I start feeling rage.
Walk into that tiny room...
Screaming at them...at the top of my lungs.
"FUCK YOU!"
Standing up they start running towards me.
I turn to run away.
The dorr slams right in my fucking face.
Picking me up throwing me around.
Like they've always done.
Blood drips from my nose.
Out my eyes.
Here I sit and cry.
I know this is only how you people make me feel.
But it hurts...everytime you look at me and take your dog inside.
Everytime you look at me and laugh and make shitty comments.
Everytime you make fun of me...
It hurts. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Scythe42 (4-10-2005 - 02:33 PM)
| That was awsome. I know exactly how you feel. I really do. They just laugh and don't understand. They hate me. I don't know why. I really,truly do understand. I've felt it before. |
by untidy_posession (4-10-2005 - 03:35 PM)
| Oh my god, it's so sad and so beautiful. This is an awful situation, But the poem is fantastic, it really, really is. Check out my "The Boy Who Screamed And No-one Heard" It's a little similar to this, or the same sort of theme. Well done so much, this was so good. |
by The Black Halo (4-11-2005 - 12:48 PM)
| What the fuck is so hard about simple fucking punctuation? One fucking key at the end of each line. That's not so hard is it? Jesus Christ this is another shit poem. |
by AthiestAnarchist (4-11-2005 - 08:48 PM)
by (guest) (4-12-2005 - 05:27 PM)
| you need to get the fuck over it everyone gets picked on... jeez shut up already ... |
by Flagg_19 (4-12-2005 - 07:17 PM)
| Yes... the main inspiration for the bulk of us here at ZenHex; myself is also included in this bulk. |
by (guest) (4-16-2005 - 04:50 PM)
| forget about those assholes on here and in real life who put you down, you are a good person, why do you care so much about what others think? you wont change how they feel but you can change how you feel about yourself. why would you want to be liked and accepted by the jerks in your life, its better to be alone for a bit and figure out what you want in life than by being surrounded by people who constantly put you down.
changing how you feel is the most important as when you do that that is when their words stop hurting. why does it matter to you what strangers think about you or even people that know you when they say false things about you.
if people are saying mean stuff about you then they arent the type of people that you want in your life. |
by AthiestAnarchist (4-16-2005 - 11:01 PM)
| You make a really good point. I guess I should have mentioned this but I wrote it for a friend cause we were talking about it and it just kina inspired me to do it so I did. But, that's a really good point. |
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