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The chosen path
written by Genocide Reaper05:34 AM 8/6/04| What do you see when you look at the sky? Do you think God cries? Does he sit and wonder why? Where as we are nothing more than his creation, a stain on earth, a terminal existence of pleasure, pain, hate, love, rage, peace. Order. and Chaos. Is God Hardened? does he Hate? what will change when he comes back around, to raise another from the dust upon the ground. Soil we are, scarred by ourselves, self mutilation. Self justification. And in the end. Who are we to say that we can't go on. Does God grow angery at our sins? or does he just want us to make ammends? He'll wish for us to dish out the Praise, but Praise what? and how? Who will choose the Chosen path? It must be those who Choose not too lose. Falling free. The sinners are, Flying deep into Jesus's veins as the demons of yesterday. For no one knows if he conned the world or if he saved it from drowning. Did he point the finger to Heaven or To a Fake Heaven? Did he fabricate his ideals as the Goverment reinstates its war deals? God has come and God has gone. God has saw and God has Done. And as I see most shy away from questioning what I feel is God will be an Eternal Everything to me. But to you what is he? does he point a barrel at anything? |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by boredome22 (8-10-2004 - 08:37 PM)
| pure greatness...sometimes i think that way too..but i guess a lot of people do now these days...i dunno |
by sarah10087 (12-12-2004 - 04:48 PM)
| I dont like the structure of your poetry |
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