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» Poem: Self pitty
Self pitty
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
03:18 AM 4/11/05
As the days creep by,
and nights take forever.
I havent been staying up to cry,
and stopped saying never.
I woke up and saw the sun,
instead of sleeping in the shadows.
The weight I thought weighed a ton,
now is completely hollow.
No one wants to know it,
everyone wants self pitty.
Just forget it,
it so fucking annoying.
Keep feeling sorry for yourself,
and thinking everythings bad.
Be like everyone else,
and never realize the life you could have.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Puh puh pathetic!

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» Comments / Feedback
by lycan_of_death (4-11-2005 - 03:22 AM)
O_O that is good.

by Fuck_you_all (4-11-2005 - 03:50 AM)
oh, shutup, you know u do the same thing. you know all you want is to feel sorry for yourself. your poem sucks dick so get a life!

by Cut_Wrist_Risk (4-11-2005 - 04:11 AM)
IF YOU HAD ANY KNOWLEDGE AT ALL YOU'D UNDERSTAND THAT THE POEM IS TAlKING ABOUT REALIZING HOW THINGS GOT BETTER AND I DONT DO THE SAME SHIT NO MORE. SO I HOPE YOU FEEL STUPID, CAUSE YOU SHOULD. :)-Cassy

by Tainted_Soul_777 (4-11-2005 - 06:32 PM)
thats good cassy, as usual

by Tainted_Soul_777 (4-11-2005 - 06:32 PM)
thats good cassy, as usual

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