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» Poem: When I loved you
When I loved you
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
05:00 AM 4/11/05
Everytime I want a good laugh,
I just look back,
to you and the fact,
that you never cared...
And when I want to shed some tears,
I take a good look in the miorror,
I realize my biggest fear,
is hurting myself.
When I feel like there's nothing to live for,
and I can't take it anymore,
I think of before,
when I loved you.


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by cutsoffaith (4-11-2005 - 08:36 AM)
people do things, to hurt us... people say things to challenge us. we all have our own ways of exspressing how we feel, some of us mentally, and others physically, but one that people usually don't say is the impulsively. we who cut can control that impulse...we generate it somewhere else. mainly on ourselves. though it's only hurtting us...it's doesn't matter,we need a sense of control over something. exspecially our own pain. no one else should have the right to hurt us. i don't care who they are. we are still human beings.we do have hearts, and like every other human...it can hurt just as much... keep writting. now i don't feel so alone...

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