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Goodbye to you
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk07:46 AM 4/11/05There's no more screams,
and im fresh out of cries.
You no longer haunt my dreams,
so I guess this is goodbye.
Goodbye to what we had,
when we were friends.
Times good and bad,
always there to depend.
Goodbye to my love,
that I had for you.
I guess it wasen't enough,
so im finally through.
Im giving up on you,
and my pathetic writes.
I've done all I could do,
but I did nothing right.
Remember me when your sad,
know I'll still be here.
Forget me when your mad,
cause thats my biggest fear.
I have to say goodbye,
in order for pain to fleed.
My eyes have been dried,
no more you is what I need. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by cutsoffaith (4-11-2005 - 08:24 AM)
| i think that your writting is wonderful...don't give it up on thecount of someone who is driving towards insanity. try to forget them...make yourself a happ place. one you can forever escape to. one that is empty, where you're alone. i love your writting, please don't stop. |
by boxboy (4-11-2005 - 11:45 AM)
| A wonderful poem by the Wonderful Cassy =) |
by Tainted_Soul_777 (4-11-2005 - 06:34 PM)
| this 1 is my fav so far out of all the 16 poems freakinaasfasfa |
by (guest) (4-11-2005 - 09:39 PM)
| mary likes this one!! its good! have u ugh enterted these in the contests on allpoetry.com?? u should i bet this one would win something! |
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