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How? *Please Comment?*
written by mishy007702:08 PM 4/11/05How do you get me to do these things I do!?
For freaken hell! I read out my journal to you!!!
Is it your sweet voice? You're stunning looks?
Or a sweetness that isn't even wrote about in books?
You could persuade me into doing anything for you!
Is it because you care? Do I really love you true?
Or are you just a con? Maybe you are are telling me lies!
Then why would you help mend all of these cries? |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
The other night I read out my journal to Rory while I was on the phone to him, I don't know how he gets me to do this stuff. He gets me to tell him everything! I don't know how though! lol. I love him with all my heart and I'm just happy he cares! He got me to give him the link to my poems, when I joined here so none of my friends could see them! But now most of my mates have access! PLEASE COMMENT????
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (4-11-2005 - 02:14 PM)
| it was sweet and it really fits my life right now with everythimg thats going on . |
by heartoftears (4-11-2005 - 02:36 PM)
| I think hes just using u lots of guys have the power to do that and they have tricked me many times to doing what they really want they use me and i think they love me then they leave me once thay get what they wanted dont listen to it they might say they love u or try to make it look lik thay do but they r just lying belive me forget about it and be strong |
by cutsoffaith (4-11-2005 - 03:13 PM)
| only sometimes heartoftears, but other times it's lust and not love, but if he cares try to hold on to him as long as posible. |
by randomdude666 (4-11-2005 - 03:47 PM)
| ime a big fan of your poems, so i really wish you all the best. from joe (randomdude666@hotmail.com) ps- if u eva wana talk on msn, ime open to offers (that goes to any1) |
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