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Change Of Pace *plz comment*
written by mishy007703:49 AM 4/13/05Screaming at everyone around
Pushing them all to the ground
Shoving them out of the way
Forcing you here to stay
Making sense of pointless clues
Walking in your tattered shoes
Banging fists on these walls
Crying at each of these falls
Holding onto dear life
Tears falling onto this knife |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Just... I dunno... I'm in the most shit mood today... I just wanna go to sleep...PLEASE COMMENT?!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by bloody_tears_girl (4-13-2005 - 04:39 AM)
| this poem is good, i like how you rhymed it. keep it up. |
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