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It's hell even in heaven
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk07:36 PM 4/13/05It's hell even in heaven if you're not there.
Nothing's worth doing if you dont care.
I cry myself to sleep nothing new here,
I no longer get shocked by the coldness of my tear.
I want you so bad,
cause its what I can't have.
Looking to something that doesn't exist,
I try not to want, but you're an insist.
I cant take this pain any longer,
I've been trying but you're not growing fonder.
I let go of life, living like this isn't fair.
But it's hell even in heaven if you're not there. |
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ok...yup..sure
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| » Comments / Feedback | by FireyDemon13 (4-13-2005 - 09:13 PM)
by (guest) (4-15-2005 - 06:01 PM)
| omg ur really really talented
this is wat poetry's all about in my opinion
i dont kno if ur like pouring ur heart out with poetry but it seems like it so well i just want to say that ur an awsome poet
and incase this is u pouring ur heart out...i hope ull stick around longer |
by Used6HH5MCR7 (4-15-2005 - 07:46 PM)
| Ive read like Many of your Peom... Your Awesome!!! KEEP WRITING!!! |
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