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Fight *plz comment*
written by mishy007712:48 PM 4/14/05A scream that once so dearly was mine
People telling me that I will be fine
Jealous foes are weakened by heart
I was winning from the very start
Captured souls cry out loud
Attracting quite a huge crowd!
The man who laughs at my defeat
Has a disease that no one can treat
An echo that no one can rid
An amount that no one can bid
An endless battle no one can fight
Two men arguing who is right
This will all end in a fight.... |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Just sumthin i wrote at about 5am. lol. PLEASE COMMENT???
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (4-14-2005 - 01:00 PM)
| I couldn't quite understand all of it but I'm very distracted and I can't think streight right now from stress...but, even though I didn't understand it I liked it. |
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