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Cleaning out my closet
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk06:30 PM 4/14/05I hear a noise and crawl under my blankets,
I shiver in fear and dont understand it.
I call for my mom to check in the closet,
she laughs at me and says that's non sense.
I hear more noises comming from over there,
across the room so cold and bare.
It's haunting me with it's annoying sounds,
I start to look all around.
I wonder why wont it let me sleep,
as I hear all these things creep.
I walk towards the closet wanting to turn back.
I see you, knowing I have to clean my closet to get over my past. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by pipa (4-14-2005 - 06:35 PM)
interesting thoughts and compariosons against your past. well done :D:D |
by pipa (4-14-2005 - 06:35 PM)
*comparisons* sorry about spelling |
by RazorBladeKisses4U (4-14-2005 - 06:53 PM)
Very beautiful, I can tell it is very personal, and I love that in poems, all of mine really mean something to me. |
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