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» Poem: I'v done wrong
I'v done wrong
written by Genocide Reaper
05:14 AM 8/7/04
Please Despise me. Wish for my Demise. Pray for my Death. Iv done you wrong, See through my Hate, touch my face. I can't wait any longer. I won't be denied. She was my Love, she was my Life. These words above. I never heard. I wanted her so desperatly to know that I couldn't help but love to hurt her. I loved her so. I call me Low. I slit Her throat. With out a Razor or Blade. With my words the slice was made, through out our time together her Smile came to Fade. You now should Hate me.. For I loved her. For I cared. and Four kisses did I give her, before I killed her. So Jealious, and so Careless. I couldn't see she did Love. I couldn't hear her Vow. So I Fucking slapped her. Then told her to Bow. She couldn't Frown, she couldn't cry aloud, her silent tears and smile. Was enough to fill me with Guilt. I watched her bow. Then I kicked her stomech, and told her the life within. Wasn't worth it. But as I know Now. she did love me, and made an eternal Vow. Here, and Now. I couldn't cry if I tried. She loved me First hand. Like a Snake, I coiled and struck, she would curl up beside me and never want to let go. Even after. All the beatings and torture, she came to Know. I couldn't help myself. It was my Love...But now its my Bitter stain.. I am the Snake, and she is The Slave. I tore her apart. Then Ate her Heart.. Now she's a Lifeless Object, a Cold Manican without expression. I feel so Good in one side of the Mind. And in the Other. I feel so....Deprived.


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by SuperBob (8-7-2004 - 07:00 AM)
wow moving poem right there...definately felt the emotion...my i am in such awe of your work!

by LoStBroKEnConFusEd (8-8-2004 - 06:23 AM)
i love it and i understand it... ur poems r really good u r really talented

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