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» Poem: God Isn't Real *plz comment*
God Isn't Real *plz comment*
written by mishy0077
07:51 AM 4/15/05
I'm falling deeper then I ever have before
The one I depended to hold me isn't here anymore
I asked God to make him come back to me once more
I haven't been the same since he walked out the door
He never came back, God isn't real
If he is, he's not at all the real deal
I lost all my faith that painfull day
My heart broke in every possible way
Ever since then I've hung my head low
Why he left? I guess I will never know
Tears are brought to my eyes at the mention of his name
I hate you god, I did nothing to deserve to be placed in this game
If God was real, then why does he let us suffer this pain
If God was caring then he wouldn't let this happen again


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I cant get out of the depressing poetry habbit. lol.
If u cant tell, i dont belive in god. lol. I have my reasons.....
PLEASE COMMENT

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» Comments / Feedback
by forever_lost_in_me (4-15-2005 - 07:59 AM)
yah evryone has different reasons why they dont believe in god. i dont believe in god either, and i love depressing poetry! i love your poetry u should enter it on a contest really u should!!!! last time i told someone that the did it and they got 2 prize! but thats my opinion, i loved it

by (guest) (4-15-2005 - 01:38 PM)
hey i really liked your poem what can i say im morbid. but i also dont believe in god. i have a few poems on here also if you want to check them out. my name is pulse_ofthe_maggots.

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