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Cut wrist risk, I say tisk tisk.
written by Genocide Reaper05:41 PM 4/15/05Delete my comment,
another shall arise.
If you wish to live no more, then follow through with your idiotic suicide.
Child of hollow threats.
Child that needs a good whelp,
right on the head.
The more you whine,
the more you complain,
the more I want to see you dead.
Ignore my words,
treat them like simple blurs.
If you wish to pay no attention, then be not an attention seeker.
Child of craving pity,
child seeking some sort of mercy,
from others you don’t even know.
All you wish to do, is leave here, some where else you want to go.
If this is your final wish, then slit those wrist.
On the other hand, you live and taste my verbal fist.
Lie to yourself,
praying to bleed to death,
All silent for the exception of tears and a weak breath. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Cut_Wrist_Risk (4-15-2005 - 05:44 PM)
| wow u wasted all that time writing a poem on me...lmao thats uhh pretty sad. |
by chaoticthoughts (4-15-2005 - 05:46 PM)
| There is no doubt that you're writing is good, actually very good. But I just had a question surface. You know how you write about everyone else here in the hex, and you critize everyone for what they write. And you are cut out for what you do because you're sarcastic, but what would you write about if you didn't write about 'us'? I mean the 'complaining' kids of hex? |
by Genocide Reaper (4-15-2005 - 05:47 PM)
| I didn't waste any time, your idiocy just gave me the need to write a poem. Your feeding me idea's for verbal abuse. Thats all. So thanks for being a suicidal cliche. |
by Genocide Reaper (4-15-2005 - 05:52 PM)
| Lets see, religion, death, life, anything really. Give me something to write about and I can write about it. War, strife, pain, hate. I've written poems about it all man, I'm not stuck in one rut, writing poems about kids on the Hex. Its just something to help my poetic fire grow. Feeding me idea's, the more I write, the better I get. Thats the way I see it. If you love me, hate me, don't even know me, you'll improve me without even knowing you do. |
by chaoticthoughts (4-15-2005 - 05:54 PM)
| Nice response. I like you're work, although at times intense, very good. Oh and not everyone is suicidal here. I'm not. And you can critize my poems anytime. You're good. |
by Genocide Reaper (4-15-2005 - 06:00 PM)
| You know man, I don't like to criticize people, but some times, I just can't stand to see some one bitching about the same thing over and over again. |
by (guest) (4-15-2005 - 06:01 PM)
| good job some one knows these guys are of their fucking meds.
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by (guest) (4-15-2005 - 06:01 PM)
| my nmames nick in case u wanted to know yu fucking nut |
by RazorBladeKisses4U (4-15-2005 - 06:08 PM)
| Yes, I write a lot about death and killing myself, but, hey, thats what I want to write about, its MY poems, you don't have to read them....but anywaysm I think your work is wonderful, and you have the right to say want you want about "us" but, anyways, just wanted you to know I like your work. |
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