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How I REALLY feel
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
05:57 PM 4/15/05
I really do feel uselss,
and with out a cause.
I often find myself clueless,
and covered in flaws.
I wish I could be a better person,
but no matter how hard I try.
I just can't do it,
I always break down and cry.


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by (guest) (4-15-2005 - 05:58 PM)
Wow im am good you ARE off ur meds!!

by Cut_Wrist_Risk (4-15-2005 - 06:02 PM)
no

by Genocide Reaper (4-15-2005 - 06:03 PM)
I feel the same way, so you know what I do? Try harder, work harder, push myself into no end.

by Cut_Wrist_Risk (4-15-2005 - 06:05 PM)
but I cant...

by Nug (4-15-2005 - 06:07 PM)
great one

by perfect.flaws (4-15-2005 - 06:10 PM)
uhh yah you can... i do it all the time... i feel the way you feel all the time.. you CAN. try harder.

by Genocide Reaper (4-15-2005 - 06:11 PM)
Of course you can. You have to want to change, only you can change yourself.

by Used6HH5MCR7 (4-15-2005 - 07:39 PM)
I feel that everyday of my life. what helps me is Music, and writing your feelings down like you just did in this poem. it was extremly GOOD!

by (guest) (4-15-2005 - 11:38 PM)
OMG This is one of the first time, but Mary agrees with Genocide Reaper. You CAN try, and only you can change you. WOW That was great. Very wise words from that Genocide up there ^^ yes yes yes! I agree 110%!!!!! :-D ~Mary!~

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