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» Poem: Smiled on your Dying day!
Smiled on your Dying day!
written by Open_Until_4Am
05:34 PM 4/16/05
I’ll take the blame for letting things go way to far.
I put the shadow out in the light to watch it burn .
You don’t know what it’s like to feel so alone.
Don’t tell me you cut to feel the pain I indoor everyday of my life.
Cause it won’t even compare to the loss I’ve had.
Hate you for you, cause you’re nothing but some dirty lie!
Oh damn it’s so true, I’ll bleed my every drop of blood just for you!

This soul is dead I’ve been so lost
So blind, if I can’t hear then time is gone.
Sew the wound back up with a clear string
So no one can see these empty scars!

To my surprise I look outside and the sun didn’t rise again.
Who takes the time to spell out all the letters
Think back on all the broken promises you made.
If there was ever a time you pulled through,
What happened to the hope I had in you and I.
We fell so high, like we almost thought we could fly!
So let me close my eye.

My soul is dead, lost for so long.
Blind to what is in front of me, and I can’t hear anything so time is done.
Sewed me up with no skill so all you see will spill over the ground.
These empty scars are dark and deep that they make me want to hide.

Come on now punch a hole in the sky
Maybe light will pass me by and I’ll see again
Oh what’s life with out dreaming, and dreaming with out screaming
For the terrible nightmares that you seem to get, keep you up late in the night.
Lay your sick head down to sleep, don’t feel bad for me
Cause I smiled on your dying day!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I can't tell you much of why I wrote this and what it is about. But I would like to know if anyone likes it.. So please if you read this comment me.

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by Scythe42 (4-16-2005 - 05:38 PM)
that was really good. You're an awsome writer.

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