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paint me every shade of red
written by trulybroken5701:13 AM 4/17/05paint me every shade of red,
crimson.......
bright as fresh blood
shed from my wounds of pain,
suffocate me in my own art,
use the sharpest paintbrush i can find.......
short shallow strokes,
deeper, longer ones,
i'll never forget this masterpiece,
this masterpiece slowly ruining my life,
and i'll start to paint once more,
paint away the feeling
as i dip the brush in red,
red pain i've shed myself........
soon my waist and now my wrist
will be part of my hidden gallery,
paint me every shade of red,
never forget the picture,
never remember the horror,
just stare in awe as i paint,
use my skin as my canvas.
paint me every shade of red.......... |
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i actually like this one.......please comment
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| » Comments / Feedback | by trulybroken57 (4-17-2005 - 06:12 PM)
| gee, thanx for all these comments, i just don't know what tp do with all of them! *sarcasm* |
by somethingcorporate (4-17-2005 - 06:32 PM)
| gee thanks. apperently you don't want my help anymore, so i'm not even going to try and make you feel better. |
by somethingcorporate (4-18-2005 - 06:27 PM)
| i'm sorry; just ignore that comment. i'm always an asshole when i'm not in a good mood and i say stuff that i don't usually mean. i'm really sorry... |
by HiddenTears03 (4-18-2005 - 08:53 PM)
| It's really good. I like it. I'm going to U2U you I have a question if you don't want to answer it it's fine. I mean I'm just wondering. |
by trulybroken57 (4-18-2005 - 10:09 PM)
| tommy? wtf? what was that about? it did not even mention one word about u, and also i have sum shit that i need to tell u, but u never called!!! thanx, really appreciate that one......sorry, just ignore all this, i just have really needed to talk to u all day....... |
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