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Once upon a time.
written by Genocide Reaper06:30 PM 8/7/04| Once there was sadness across the land, as the vanguard of Brutality swept across the quiet lives like a shadowey hand. All of the people in this land, bit the dust, without a fuss. Only then did the lone surviver start to cuss.. His anger peaked. His love Blacked out. His Rage, the only thing he had Now. Why did he not cry? Why did he not weep? Why did he not pay respects and show them he once did care? Because my Readers...As he looked out upon the Barren land, the blood soaked bodies, and the sound of a lone child crying. Echoed through out his mind.. He couldn't shake all which he saw, he knew that he had a Flaw...He deep down inside... Really didn't care anymore. He just wanted to wait before, the snow storm. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by SuperBob (8-7-2004 - 07:48 PM)
| ah ha..it's pointless for me to tell you what i think...you alredy know...you poetry god you...anyroad...though...seriously...i really do enjoy this one...its wondrous! |
by (anonymous) (8-8-2004 - 05:21 AM)
| I think that if you wanted to you could write one hell of a book about a lone warrior or something. I mean that was so sad and you discribed it so well that I could picter the distruction of this war in my mind. I rilly liked it.
Niki |
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