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Pictures of Loneliness
written by SuperBob07:35 PM 8/7/04Another night that I have to fall asleep to thoughts of you.
The images I want just can't see through...
How can one person be so near to my heart,
When I have only just learned of love as an art?
Together we should be for so many of our days,
But my future seems awkward, that's the least I can say.
No matter what though, whatever comes to my life,
I will remember all the times you fought off my knife.
You banishedit clear, right out of my land;
And now when I feel unstable I just take hold of your hand.
For with you I feel all my woes being lost...
With you this hated sunlight turns to frost.
In the cold dark nights when we can see each others' eyes,
I feel your care and forget every lie.
All the lies I used on myself and others,
You make those disperse like none other.
Before you came and helped me to rise,
I would travel around in shroud disguise.
Because of what you have helped me accomplish,
I will never fade away from you; honest.
Love has gotten us this far,
And I wish on it every night...just like a shooting star. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
okie well title doesnt work...but then whatever...anyroad..i wrote thi last ngiht...well actually early this morning...when i was saddened that i didnt get the picture i was promised...okie so i wasnt promised but i was told i would get it yesterday...and i didnt...so i was saddened...anyroad...i dont know what else to say....i actually like this one better than the horridness of what i was getting out before
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (8-8-2004 - 05:10 AM)
| It was buitiful. I was just... moved by its saddness and its words of love. You have a very special gift my friend. Just remember that life is not all sad and painful, there is some happyness in our lives if we let it.
Niki |
by psycho_bunny (8-9-2004 - 06:17 AM)
| I almost cried over this one...
your talent is over whelming,
the words just flowed so well...
the emotion was captureing...
sadness as an emotion makes the best poems I have found. |
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