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Finish Line
written by SuperBob02:39 AM 8/8/04Just tell me where I'm headed, show me that I'm safe...I'm barely getting by in this never ending race...
From day to day I try to win...but sometimes I never know where I should begin...
To say that I have lost my way, is an understatement I just can't explain....
I'm traveling far without a map...so through my forest of lies my emotions attack...
Differnt ways I have gone on about my days, wondering and hoping that somehow I will be shown the right way...but through it all I never knew what would happen...somehow it all became a means to and end...and look at me now....Look at what I have become...I've lost the skills I needed most and rely on a someone who could turn out to be a hoax...
Yet even with all this new despair...something out there keeps pulling on my hair....
It wants to show me where I belong...I'll gladly go if it would just hold on...first I have some tasks to complete...some new found adventures and one finish line to meet...
I want to end this race that depression has begun...and when I do that I will have truly won |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
umm...i dont know....i wrote it just now...i write most of my poems on the spot...but anyroad...today my depression was kinda getting to me a lot more than usual..but then agian it is a saturday and saturdays are hard for me...but still...so....where was i going with this?
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Genocide Reaper (8-8-2004 - 03:03 AM)
| *Slowly starts to clap* I love it.. *looks to all the other poets with an evil stare. *Applauds begin* See? everyone loves it. =) Now...Read that carefully...Now...Do I look like a God compared to you? Not to me. |
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