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Hold me
written by Genocide Reaper07:32 AM 8/8/04| Hold me tight, and tell me it will be alright, because I don't think I can last through the light! Lick my wounds with salt, take a little from the Crop, never stop. Keep on, Keep up. Hold me, Even if I'm icy cold, it'll be nice to have some one Share in the Shadows... I can't give away my Hope to you! I can't Give you anymore of my Time! I can't give you another line! Tell me..Just tell. Me...It'll be alright, because this time...I might commit suicide tonight! I can feel you inside of my Lungs, I breathe, I taste you. I'd erase you if I got the chance, because. I can't stand this Secret plan. Now all I want. All I need. Is the you I had before.. Just give me more. All of these answers are Simple little sins. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by psycho_bunny (8-8-2004 - 07:41 AM)
| very strong emotions...
it speaks well...
all in all,
not bad. |
by xxfallenxx (8-8-2004 - 05:15 PM)
| Once again, another awesome poem from you. I love it. Just like the rest. |
by SuperBob (8-9-2004 - 02:19 AM)
| most definately amazing....i like this one greatly....maybe thats becsue i'm biased for i can relate only too much..but none the less incredible work as per usual! |
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