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» Poem: I want a black past
I want a black past
written by Genocide Reaper
08:09 AM 8/8/04
The concept of this utter fucking precept, its going to be more than what everyone thought it to be. Insane, inframed, inside of this shattered Dream. Too much time, to many lines, Far beyond the state that waits, inside of the Hate. ITS A WISHING OF NEVER DOING! ITS A CONSTANT PUMELING OF MY OWN PRIDE! I SHOULD HAVE JUST RODE OUT OF SIGHT! AND NEVER LOOKED BACK UNTIL I SAW THE LIGHT! THE LIGHT SHOWED ME THE WAY! IT TOLD ME NOT TO LEAD MYSELF ASTRAY!. FUCK! WHY DIDN'T I LISTEN!???!!! Past full of pain, only if my mind would drain, and go away, so I wouldn't feel left astray, I feel hated, I feet degrated, I think I'm just doing it to myself but I see inside of this world and it seems to be full of TREACHERY! MY WISHING OF NEVER DOING! EVER WANTING TO BE FREE FROM THE OUTSIDE SCENE, THIS SEEMS TO MUCH! LIKE A BAD DREAM! CONSTANT PRYING OF MY PRIDE! I SHOULD HAVE JUST WENT OUT ON A PERMANANT RIDE! I NEVER SHOULD HAVE CAME BACK! NOW I JUST WANT THAT PART OF MY LIFE TO BE BLACK! I just want it to go away!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This one came from embaressment

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» Comments / Feedback
by Darkwolfgirl (8-8-2004 - 09:50 PM)
sounds to me like it came from hate. awesome poem in the end

by SuperBob (8-9-2004 - 02:27 AM)
i can see how that is about embarrassment....up until i read the footnote i was relating to it....but my relation to the poem doesnt work with embarrassment...either way....*applauds and bows down to Poetry God*

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