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» Poem: Vice
Vice
written by Genocide Reaper
08:20 AM 8/8/04
Alone, cold and feeling rather broken. I see the darkness loom over head, I feel the cold setting in. Everything I gave, Everything you are, Everything you meant to me will seem just like the last good feeling I ever had. Just be glad. ICE! FREEZEING THE FEELINGS DEEP INSIDE OF ME! TRICE! HOW MANY TIMES WE SPOKE! VICE! WAS THE FEELING OF MY HEART! RIGHT AFTER, YOU TOOK IT APART!. Humble on the outside, I just know I fumbled one of the greatist things I could have ever had. Let it go, and after all this time, I don't know why. Mistake, I made the mistakes, Rapes. It rapes all of my emotions, Give and take, I give you take, my life, that just had to Break. ICE! FREEZEING THE FEELINGS DEEP INSIDE! TRICE! HOW MANY TIMES WE SPOKE AT NIGHT! VICE! TIGHTENING AROUND MY HEART! JUST BEFORE YOU. TORE IT APART! NICE I TRIED TO BE! ICE! FREEZEING ME FROM THE START! TRICE HOW MANY TIMES WE SPOKE JUST ONE MORE AND I'D TRY A RESTART! VICE! THE FEELING OF MY HEART! RIGHT AFTER YOU TORE IT APART! (I'm lost.) TORE IT APART! (I'm lost.) YOU TORE ME APART!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Why I can be rather Bitter. And just some Pain I thought I would Share.

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