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My Family *plz comment*
written by mishy007708:32 AM 4/20/05It's at night, I'm in bed
Hands placed to cover over my head
My family can't hear the crying
I'm getting sick of this lying
They are deaf to the silent screams
They don't have a clue about these dreams
They think I'm fine; I tell them so
Maybe it's better that they don't know |
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Last night i waz feelin shit, i rote dis in bed. PLEASE COMMENT!!!!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by star13 (4-20-2005 - 08:33 AM)
by XshatteredXsmileX (4-20-2005 - 08:42 AM)
| this is a really good poem! i like it alot and dam u got some talent for your rhymes! |
by PIAID (4-20-2005 - 12:55 PM)
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