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Stabbing myself instead
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
05:59 PM 4/20/05
I saw you riding by,
and again I started to cry.
I couldn't find the reasons why,
but I wanted you to die.
That night I waited for you to fall asleep.
And pray the lord your soul to keep.
I snuck into your downstairs window,
I saw you laying there you began to glow.
I must have startled you,
because you began to move.
Then fell back into your dream,
inocently as they may seem.
I had tears rolling down my cheek,
I felt like whimpering but I couldn't speak.
I went to the bedroom door and locked it.
Took the knife out of my pocket.
A tear fell on you,
before I did what I had to do.
You awoke
I began to choke.
You looked at me and sat up in your bed.
I couldn't do it....I stabbed myself instead.


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by (guest) (4-20-2005 - 08:51 PM)
*THIS IS MARY* whoa! Man this poem was nifty as Hell! I love it. Ya know how the first two lines say you saw Cody then you cried, yeah don't feel bad that happened to me too. When I was coming home from school....I saw Joey....and well yeah. Anywho, I really like this poem Cassy. SERIOUSLY get some of these published! I'm telling you! This one....gosh I love it....haha it makes me chuckle a bit. :-D Yet another kick booty poem, by a kick booty writer! *LMAO!* Haha! Love you lots! Bye Bye!

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