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Her life slipped
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk03:12 AM 4/21/05The mother doesn't care,
that father's never there.
They have given up on hope,
the child's already got the rope.
The mother pushes the problems away,
forget them tommorow just like yesterday.
She can't accept the fact her dauhgter's insane.
All of this is too much for her life to contain.
The father wants to do what he can,
but he can't and I understand.
He has WAY bigger things to be thinking of,
but I know he cares and has plenty of love.
But the child can only go so far,
with an empty mind and broken heart.
She stumles through life each day,
pretending everything's okay.
Untill one day she finally flips.
It's down hill from there... her life has slipped. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by magistix911 (4-21-2005 - 03:18 AM)
| Awesome, I like how you made it rhyme at the beginning. |
by DriinK_TiiL_y0u_L0V3_Me (4-21-2005 - 04:09 AM)
by (guest) (4-21-2005 - 06:36 AM)
by Darkdeathangel-Neoloser (4-21-2005 - 07:49 AM)
| wow i liek tha ... its really good |
by dirtyneedles517 (4-21-2005 - 09:40 AM)
| it's really good, and shows artistic talent. i look forward to reading more from cut_wrist_risk. also, by the way, really cool ID name! |
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