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» Poem: Betrayed Trust *plz comment*
Betrayed Trust *plz comment*
written by mishy0077
08:21 AM 4/21/05
Now I can not trust even YOU
You showed people when i asked not to
You betrayed my well-earned trust
Our friendship will begin to rust
Why would you do that to me?
I can't trust you - now I see
But I can not let you walk away
No, you must so dearly pay


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This person should know it's for them, im not naming anyone. At all. PLEASE COMMENT

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by (guest) (4-21-2005 - 08:37 AM)
great poem, writing how u feel is a good way to show how u react to certain things, by the way the poem sounds i hope things get better 4 u... from little pixie x x x

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