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One Day
written by SuperBob04:53 AM 8/9/04One way I will be with you
I tell you this most true
One day I will hold you
I tell you this so don't be blue
One way I will find you
I tell you this most dear
One day I will kiss you
I tell you this to stop any fear
One way I have fallen for you
I tell you this sealed with a kiss
One day I will die for you
I tell you this do you get the jist?
One way I will prove my devotion
I tell you this while looking at mars
One day I will collaspe under you
As we have sex beneath the stars |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
okie...i dont really enjoy the second line in the last stanza...but it works i guess..i couldnt think of anything better that rhymed with stars...well there was "i tell you this behind the parked cars" but that was just crappy...and i was thinking of hwo to use bars...like seperation between the two...but that got confusing and i couldnt find any good wording so i caved
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| » Comments / Feedback | by psycho_bunny (8-9-2004 - 06:08 AM)
| I so understand this poem...
behind parked cars or haveing sex under the stars,
its a wonderful and beautiful poem...
it really painted a picture for me. |
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