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» Poem: I Try
I Try
written by SuperBob
05:48 AM 8/9/04
I did my part...now how you can rest
I tried to get through, and it seems that I have
But in the end it all comes down to you
For days you've managed, I know how that hurts
But I'm proud that you resisted your new found urge
You will over come this, don't you worry dear
If ever you feel you will fail, just remember I'm here
Forever and ever, you can't get rid of me
I will be by you side whenever you're in need


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I just really proud of her...she lasted for days with the urge and didnt act on it...she is stronger than i was when i first started....i want her to come with me to see my counsellor...but i wont push it...i can just use what he uses with me with her....that may help....i hope she pulls through and doesnt end up like me *mando bear hug for my tutee*

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