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Broken Trust *plz comment*
written by mishy007701:47 AM 4/23/05I told you so many things about my life
I told you about how I used the knife
Then you go and tell everyone
I'm sorry, but our friendship is done
I can't stand to look at your face
Just imagine being put in my place
You have one person you trusted
Now that trust had truly rusted
Because he told them what you told him
Now your hope has grown very dim
Now I will get revenge, you poor guy
Don't even think about asking me why! |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I was tellin my guy friend about stuff and how I used to cut. Anyway he told every1 and I didn't find out till yesterday (about 2 months after it happened). My best friend told me and so did my bf. And I am going to get him back, by tellin everyone his secrets he told me.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by intearsforever (4-23-2005 - 06:49 AM)
| That wasn't nice of him today, and I understand why you are angry, but getting back at him, isn't the right thing. Do you really want to be like him? Do you want someone to feel the way you do? I know, it doesn't seem fair, but going off and getting back at him is not gonna work. We have to balance everything, but by getting back at him, that would just lead to him doing something else. I would say either talk to him, or just ignore him and tell him to fuck off...I dunno. But revenge isn't the way to go. |
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