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Painful Rain
written by SuperBob09:28 AM 8/9/04My knees are locking at this sight
I have come to you to surpass my fright
But tonight just wont do
When what's worrying me is new
For so long I have loved the feel of the rain
But somehow now it's only causing pain
Is it from the memories I see
Each time I try to catch the drops in three?
I can't understand why the rain hurts tonight
I just want to live like I feel I'm alright |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
shorter than usual...well too damned bad...i'm tired..its late...wait early...fuck it....its not even raining right now...but...my knee was hurting...and thats how the poem ended up....to hell with explaining it
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Genocide Reaper (8-9-2004 - 09:34 AM)
| It was still a very good poem. No matter how many excuses you made for no reason. =) |
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