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» Poem: A Final GoodBye
A Final GoodBye
written by SuperBob
09:33 AM 8/9/04
I wrote this out one time before
Somehow I managed to turn it to lore
I can't recall why I would lie again
When it always brought on a fight in a pen
The pen was my mind
and I was the victim
I would fail and fall and hope to evict them
But my mind would take over and I would fall
I could never make it through this brawl
No energy to fight
Not today not this night
So forever more I must surrender
Until I have found someone to save this helpless her


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i dont know....this was suppose to be about how i left some friends...becuse the title is how i ended that writing...but whatever...i like how my mind cant stay on track...actually i despise it but meh

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» Comments / Feedback
by Genocide Reaper (8-9-2004 - 09:36 AM)
*applauds* I enjoyed it anyway.

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