| » Poem: Triangular Praise |
Triangular Praise
written by SuperBob09:41 AM 8/9/04We three are going on about each other
Saying how great the other is
Why am I so entertained by all this
I was hoping just make the top ten list
But somehow with your help I have been drawn deeper and deeper
Into a new world with a whole new keeper
I like where I'm led
Here I don't feel my figments are making my bed
I will take refuge here for I feel safe
Thanks to the two of you
And the words that you both express so true |
All (c)Copyrights reserved by the Original Author.
Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i dont know...dont think that worked at all to what i wanted it to...i'm not really sure i know how i wanted it to work...but it was suppose to be funny...and i didnt get funny...but whatever...it was about how Kahno and Genocide Reaper and I are going back and forth kinda with comments about hwo the others work is so great....(i think they are lieing about mine..shhh)
[ View SuperBob's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ]
This Poem has been viewed 391 times
|
|
| » Comments / Feedback | by Trapezium (8-9-2004 - 09:51 AM)
| We're definately not lying about yours... your work is truly great and i have to thankyou for writing such a beautiful poem for us... thankyou so much:) |
by Genocide Reaper (8-9-2004 - 09:54 AM)
| You don't have to keep complimenting me. I'm just a form of Entertainment. Thats how I see my purpose. So just smile and Keep it up. I love the poems! |
|
|
|
|
