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This Time For Sure
written by SuperBob10:03 AM 8/9/04Where all this need to explore my unknown has risen is beyond me...I've always wanted to know how I can do what I've done....but I'm never told
So please for once open my eyes....my heart is open...but for the world it's closed....I only select a sacred few...they cary on my days from a different point of view....I've managed to confuse myself with all of this...but somehow I think that I will get through it...So many wish to help...but I only want certain one there...when I'm lying close to dying...it will be with one certain care: Did I tell you that you're the one who will for be for me? Did I tell you that you are the one who I wanted to feel close to me?
I guess I would never knwo if my true emotions did ever show...but I can just sit here and hope...that you know I am no hoax... |
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wow...all over ht eplace there...i hate you trains
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Genocide Reaper (8-9-2004 - 10:05 AM)
| I love it...So, captivating. |
by Trapezium (8-9-2004 - 10:10 AM)
| Why call your trains of thought stupid?... they give off the most wonderous and powerful emotions i have felt whilst reading a poem... you're poems are beautiful and when the trains derail they always manage to recover themselves in a sense of eloquent confusion |
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