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Whorship me
written by Genocide Reaper08:27 PM 8/9/04| Delay. Bring back the replay, over and over in my mind, its a tainted time. Look back, possesion, obsession. Live with me, or Die Free. NO. I won't let this happen, I can't control the Slappen. I can't make you whorship me, I can't make you be honest. Unto me, you'll promise!. Look back. Possesion, obsession. Live with me. Or Die Free. YES! NO! YES! NO! I DON'T LOVE YOU! I LOVE HATE! I'm in control, your distorted soul, I'll throw you in the hole, make you lose the goal, I can't look away, I'll take over, take you by the shoulders, drag you around the garden, inside of this eternal pardon, pardon you from commiting to me...NO! Bow down and Whorship me! Or lose your chance in being FREE! I never wanted anyone else...Just you...The only thing I really love...Is inflicting pain on you...I own you...Your mine....Accept it..It'll Affect it.. I'll infect you.. You'll soon know...That there is nowhere you can Go.. Praise me...Whorship me, Bow down, or Die Free. |
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Power trip...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by wandapoor (8-9-2004 - 08:45 PM)
| This is a really intense! poem!!!
It has the feel of a rap song but it's more educated and intelligent. :)
But did you mean to spell it Whorship instead of Worship? If you did that's really cool. If you didn't it might be interesting to leave it that way -- it kinda gives it a feel of being caught in a relationship with someone cheating? Like Whore and Worship combined?
It's really creative and strong. Great poem. I'm gonna reccomend it to some friends to read it! You ought to try entering it at poetry.com! |
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