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» Poem: Feed Me
Feed Me
written by SuperBob
02:36 AM 8/10/04
You ventured into my arms
I would have kept you like that if I could
Your eyes twinkled with a new desire

They say it's wrong
They say I shouldn't be this strong
But to have you make me bleed
Is all I really need

You came after me exposing your charms
I would have knelt down to you if I could
Your knife twinkling against the pale red fire

Together we make a new kind of team
Together we can have a deadly scheme
With you I will be released
And on the flesh of our lies we will feast


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i dunno i dont really like the begining...i was trying somethgn new...anyroad i really like the last stanza

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» Comments / Feedback
by Genocide Reaper (8-10-2004 - 03:25 AM)
I still love your poems, this is one and Dozen roses. =) You still amaze me.

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