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» Poem: Let's Do It Right
Let's Do It Right
written by SuperBob
10:47 PM 8/10/04
I've been a mess from the start of this life
But somehow through it all you made me feel alright
Now that you have made me expose how I feel
I think this will help to make me heal
Don't get me wrong I love feel so much pain
But make it all real something I can't tame
Not internal, but external most true
Do to me all things you wish to
No matter how satanic or disturbing it may be
I'll go along with it, no way will I flee
Just because I seem different and not like this
Doesn't mean I won't indulge, do you get the jist?
I want the pleasure to engulf me all right
And the more painful it is, the better the night
So fuck me rough and make it scar
I want to remember it so go ahead and mar
Whips, chains, and blades- oh yes
To feel this blood is erotic; I confess
Harder now. C'mon I said hurt me
Destroy me now, before I count to three
That's it too bad I'm taking the lead
For on your blood I wish to feed


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
heh...was saving poems from early this morning on disk...and well...

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» Comments / Feedback
by bleedXmeXdry (8-10-2004 - 11:09 PM)
awsome poem ;D!

by superbunnyz01 (8-11-2004 - 12:55 AM)
great poem!

by Genocide Reaper (8-11-2004 - 01:08 AM)
*just stares as he is stupified and drools*

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