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» Poem: if u love someone
if u love someone
written by xxxvampire_loverxxx
08:55 PM 8/12/04
if u love someone
let them know
if u love someone
let them go
if u miss someone
cry their tears
if u miss someone
face their fears
if u hate someone
deal with it
if u hate someone
keeps their secrets
but most of all
if u love someone
dont let them fall
if u love someone
make them feel tall
let them stand on ur shoulders, with wings 2 fly
and comfort them when they cry
if u love me
let me know
if u love me
let me go


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» Comments / Feedback
by Darkwolfgirl (8-12-2004 - 09:06 PM)
what if you don't know if you love someone? i have to let him go.

by SuperBob (8-13-2004 - 04:58 AM)
by the "if u love someone let them go" part...is that if you love them but they dont love you kind of thing...like you arent over them?....just wondering because i do love someone and i dont want to let him go....i need him as he needs him....he wont let me go as i wont let him go....but anyroad...i enjoyed them poem...i knew you had a great talent in the art of poetry...keep it up

by destroyed_one (10-22-2004 - 07:29 PM)
Oooo!!!....!!! i get teary when i read that .....

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