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» Poem: I cant breathe
I cant breathe
written by i_love_sandy
09:03 PM 8/12/04
he hates me cuz he wants to die
I love him and I want him to fly
he told me what he's going through
and all of it is true
he's prolly dumping me for rosie
I dont know why he chose me
he dumped me and now I cant breathe


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is for kahno. he dumped me and I am having trouble breathing. its cuz I love him so much. i dont think he understands me. I need to die. plz leave comments.

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» Comments / Feedback
by lettesuicidalist (8-12-2004 - 09:11 PM)
how old are u? listen no guy is worth that! u are going to be ok on your own. If u need someone to talk to oncee again. im here.... Sarah.

by i_love_sandy (8-12-2004 - 09:21 PM)
he isnt like anyother guy. I have nothin to live for anymore. he was the only one for me. dammit I need to die

by bleeding black tears (8-13-2004 - 06:17 AM)
have you ever met him in person??? dnt fall in love with someone you have never met in person

by Trapezium (8-13-2004 - 03:31 PM)
exactly what bleeding black tears said...

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