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Picking Me Apart
written by SuperBob05:40 AM 8/13/04| My place of residence is not for me...I have no place for me to be free...To get out of here is my life long wish...It would be easier if I was a fish...To swim around in a tank all day...It would be pleasant and take my mind away...I wouldn't have to worry about the issuses in the world...When I live in a place that I can't be heard...Sometimes I wonder now, in this human form....If there ever was a time when my dreams were their comands...But never have I been fulfilled...And because I feel a need to kill...I'l hurt them all like they all hurt me...I'll hurt them all and they'll wish to flee...But they won't realize why I have taken that leap...They will only realize that sound they'll be a burning heap....As I waffle on to them about so many nights...As I countinue to count them down with fright....They'll notice that I am not the one who is to blame...It wasn't me who was looking fame...Constantly badgering and bitching on and on...Double teaming me till I was all but gone...It was them who drove me to this kind of life...It was them that made it so I found a friend in a knife...But never did they accept my love...They wouldn't understand how he made me rise above...It was a mutal want, a two sided wish...But still I think I'd be better off as a fish |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I dunno...i got off topic with the whole fish thing...and then I worked myself back on topic...but I really want to be fish...i watch my fish for hours on end sometimes...and they seem so happy in their tank (even if i only clean it out every 3 months)...hell i waffle on a lot...waffle is my new word for blither...i enjoy it...do you?...anyroad...what was i going on about?..yes my want to be a fish...well...hell with it...i've said too much *shifty eyes*
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Genocide Reaper (8-13-2004 - 05:58 AM)
| I think I should just give up the explicit rhymes and let you take over.. Bravo..That was very deep. |
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