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Break Me
written by SuperBob10:02 AM 8/13/04Shake me down then bind me to the floor
Walk all over me and tell me I'm a whore
I'll take your words and learn them all
You'll think that I am small
But when the tables turns I rejoice
You'll know how has a stronger voice
Because I won't be the one to play with your mind
It'll al be somethign better that takes time
I'll hurt you nice and make you yearn
But all you'll get is a bigger burn
Because I'll sit back and listen first
Only letting me needs thirst
Then out of no where I'll break free
Making you wish that I did flee
But you'll be suffering and cowering in fear
As I supply no final tear |
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:O did I stay on track that time?
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Genocide Reaper (8-13-2004 - 10:14 AM)
| Yep.. I would say so. Bravo. |
by CheshireCatAddict996 (8-13-2004 - 08:49 PM)
| And you say I have talent. Ha! My little rymes pale in comparison. Lovely, dear, and yes, you stayed on track. |
by 23_OctoberSkies_1987 (12-27-2004 - 05:33 AM)
| i got bored and stared any poem/author that i clicked on. i happened to stumble across this one.
it's a good poem and i really enjoyed it. also u kinda sprlled something wrog; it could hav been a typo. :) |
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