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kahno broke my heart
written by i_love_sandy03:22 PM 8/20/04he killed my life
here is my knife
he doesnt care if I'm dead
so now I will stab this damned head
he doesnt care if I die
so now it pierced me, now I can fly
he broke my once loved filled heart
I now know that I was never loved from the start |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
kahno is cheating. I have a knife currantly in my hand...should I do it? he doesnt care so I think I am. goodbye all. see u guys in heaven
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Norway_babe (8-20-2004 - 03:32 PM)
by Trapezium (8-20-2004 - 07:05 PM)
| woohoo well said Trude... of course i care if you die... but why die over something that isn't real? also this poem is almost equal to the previous... go ahead, stab yourself but it wont be my fault... think of the people you'll leave behind... your family is already broken... without you it'd be even worse surely? to me it seems you're the only person keeping the family going... without you your family would fall to pieces... think of the consequences and think how guilty i'd feel even thought it's not my fault |
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