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one to two to three to death
written by i_love_sandy12:15 AM 8/24/04I loved a beautiful boy
so soft handsom and coy
when he found out i loved him
its like he got another demon
he got mad at me for no reason
he got mad every season
he started to love my friend
then i wished i was dead
there it didnt end i fell in love with someone better
now i'll tell u how he put my heart in a shredder
i was in love and he knew so well
i drew him pictures with him my heart never fell
he was just like me and he was so sweet
when he got a girl and tried to hurt me i felt numb from my head to my feet.
i was so depressed and so sad
i took a quiz on this site feeling bad
i got an email address at the end of the test
so i emailed him hoping for the best
he emailed me back and we became pretty close
then we fell in love, me he chose
we were ment to be and i needed to meet him
then he dumped me for an unknown reason and i went with the sin.
i couldnt take it anymore
now my heart just isnt sore
its gone and nowhere in site
now everything ends with a fight
i commited suicide with all my dread
and now writing this poem, now i'm dead |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
self explanitory. bad poem. oh well i tried. its the truth. this is what is wrong with me
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| » Comments / Feedback | by dumb_blonde (8-24-2004 - 12:29 AM)
| i dont think its a bad poem, its pretty good. ^_^ |
by Trapezium (8-27-2004 - 09:08 AM)
| that's not a bad poem it's a bloody excellent and cleverly progressive poem... well done! |
by i_love_sandy (8-27-2004 - 02:14 PM)
| wow, kahno! u talk just like ozzy osbourn(cant spell today lay off) with the bloody infront of words...cool. |
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