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My suicide
written by Lovely_Suicide04:53 AM 8/24/04I watch the t.v with staring blinking eyes
I see a body sprawled across the ground
Dead and unconcious
Dried blood upon the wrists
A Bloody knife by her side
I raise my voice to an almighty scream
Realizing this was me. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Trapezium (8-28-2004 - 11:00 AM)
| you said your poems weren't good... I enjoyed this one... short but to the point |
by (anonymous) (11-22-2004 - 03:36 AM)
by BleedAwayThePain (11-28-2004 - 07:56 PM)
| I Love This! God, if i on;y didn?t hate the hospital so much!lucky you!-Fade
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by scared-n-alone (12-18-2004 - 01:04 AM)
| i liked this poem and u are really good.... anyways i thought i would let ya know .. u have alot of poems |
by razorbladexbitch (1-1-2005 - 08:33 PM)
| WOW, this is realy quite striking, i actually feel like this, when im watchin stuff and somebodys committed suicde, im like, thats me........ |
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