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i wirte about my Suicide.
written by Lovely_Suicide05:05 AM 8/24/04No one believed me
No one cared or listened
They thought i was only after attention and clearly purely weak
But i knew i wasn't
i knew how many times i cut myself bleeding to the floor
i knew how many times i attempted to end my life but never came close
That day i lifted my head
I held it high showing i was brave
i Picked up a knife without a flinch
I Slashed my wrists without showing pain
I collapsed onto that floor
Knowing i would die
Knowing i would never see this world again
It made me proud to know at last i had done it
I had committed suicide. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by XxMusicSavesXx (8-24-2004 - 02:29 PM)
| deep...good....but deep......please dont cut yourself anymore, i used to do the same and it was the stupidest thing i could have done....now i have scars to prove my stupidity |
by (anonymous) (8-24-2004 - 04:54 PM)
| i loved your poem...i find that suicidal poems are the best...if you get or make and more please email me at bee1991@hotmail.com...hope to here from you soon |
by Trapezium (8-28-2004 - 11:01 AM)
| very deep... i can relate... especially to the first stanza... it's such a good poem =) |
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