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Black Roses.....
written by Lovely_Suicide06:40 AM 8/24/04My coffin is full of Big black roses
Crawling with spiders and cobwebs
They lay next me sitting there watching watching.....
Their waiting for me to bring me under for the sin that i had done
I struggle to fight against the evil
I can't im to weak
I go under taken from the black evil of the roses. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by vampiredarkbklood (8-24-2004 - 08:31 PM)
| hey i like that poem its very short and eery!! good good! |
by Trapezium (8-28-2004 - 11:09 AM)
| this is a really good poem... deep and very capturing... well done |
by XxMusicSavesXx (8-29-2004 - 04:11 PM)
by Poison Ivy (9-25-2004 - 04:13 AM)
| this poem is a lot like the poem i wrote called 'alive in my grave'. but i like yours too. great minds think alike. very nice. |
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